I lay
in a hot
bath
but the seal
in the
stopper
leaked
and the water
went down
(and I
with it,
too):
and once under-
neath the tub
I looked
up
at a light
the shape
of a ring
coming
through
the drain,
but there was
a tugging
on me,
a weight
pulling me
down:
and the ring
got smaller,
the light
went out,
and I thought
this
must be
the end
of the poem.
Blog post title from the song by The Smiths of the same name.
nice twist
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Oh, love that song! A great, twisting, slurping poem 🙂 Nicely done
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My favorite Smiths song! Thanks for running down the drain with me. Bill
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‘To die by your side is such a heavenly way to die.’ Such great lyrics matched with a wonderful tune. 🙂
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The pleasure, the privilege is mine…
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🙂
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