Down came the rain like a permanent marker. The permanence of fall, of nature, of flame. And the gutters gasped, and the rain slapped until it made sparks when it hit. And down the panes like a waterfall, the cadence of the rain as it thickens and goes slack. The rain shifting sideways, drawing to a hiss. Me in my blanket and the rain out there, all the reasons to be inside. The ground that was brown is green again, and the leaves are brought down to be bagged and blown, stuffed in a can, carted away…beneath the hiss and a long kiss that is this, autumn rain.

That’s some serious rain, there. I hope you don’t spring a leak. Seriously nice descriptions too, very vivid, very good.
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I know, like we have rain to complain about with all this Florence talk, right? But it was writing-worthy. Thanks for reading, boss. Appreciate it.
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Wonderful wordplay! A keeper.
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Ha! cool, thanks and glad you liked it! Bill
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Very effective. I’d record it, and hire someone from Ireland to recite it.
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Ha! Welsh, better yet! Stack up the consonants, yo’!
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i can almost see it. i love the autumn rain.
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I know! For like the first 10 instances.
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A little singalong at the end. I like it. (Although my iPad is not letting me “like” anything.)
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Your iPad needs an attitude adjustment. But thanks Ross!
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Love the cosiness of the blanket in the middle of all the dampness.
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It’s all true! Fruit flies circling me and my wine like Pigpen from Peanuts. Blanky and all…
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Tell ’em to get their own wine.
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Really. Where do they all come from? I like how one day they’re just all gone and there’s no evidence.
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When you travel between some states in Aus you have to deposit any fruit in bins to prevent fruit flies hitching lifts.
Yours, however, are being eaten by the giant spider of the previous post.
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Ah too true, the wolf spider. Thanks for reminding me about that. Before I go out in the hot tub again.
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Ah, Seattle in September … 🌧🏔
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Better than Seattle in November!
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