In my time of darkness I go back to the old haunts,
to Raymond Carver:
I closed the book
and he looked back, and in the morning
spoke to me on the toilet, in my bathrobe
with my phone:
He said, What kind of man are you,
trading your time for coins?
(We are all in the business
of trading our time — )
And foolish, first day
it feels like spring
I walked to the lake in the morning dark
to the sound of waterfowl landing, making V’s —
to the footsteps on the gravel coming down
to the dock, where I held
in the dark like the waterfowl,
unseen —
and stood there
waiting
until I got what I came for,
then headed home
they said the sunset was 4:59 today,
the same time the app
said my pizza would come
Wow, the perfect minute.
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Ha, yes — happy Friday, Jeff!
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Raymond Carver, another PNWer, a life unsure it wise to emulate, though art? Art is a different matter. Reminded of the opening lines of his poem “Money,” all of it perhaps.
Definitely a RC closing. Nicely done.
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I know, from some odd-sounding place in Oregon. Have you been to Port Angeles? My imagination let’s me picture him there in some of the sadder, more sordid places. I like your comment here, it touches on the complicated nature of what we see or imagine in the artists we admire, I think — I only see him through what he created, but I’ll bet he was tough to date, so to speak. I’ll look at that Money poem, I don’t know it. Went digging around the Half Price book store today in the C’s but didn’t turn up anything more. Thanks Kim for the kind words.
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and the timing of the pizza and the sun setting on your day is perfect
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I know, if I was punching out at a factory that would work too!
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Raymond Carver? I always loved him. Your blog was spot on for me.
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I know and he looks like your old boss, Rick I think!
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Love it and so much fun reading you 🙂
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Hi Vishal and happy new year! Hope you got those teeth sorted out by now 🙂 Great to hear from you.
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Thanks so much and wish you a Happy New Year, Bill. One is sorted and the second one got temporary feeling that should find its way out this year. Wow, u remember 🙂
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A good poem and a good punchy/funny ending.
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I’m a huge Carver fan (have I mentioned that?) but I don’t know if I’d idolize him or take his advice. Like most of our heros, if you take too close a look you won’t like what you see.
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Yes, same page we are on.
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